Black Poetry : private letter no. 4

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in no time I’ve taken
    it upon myself to
    enema you out of my
    system.
    inserting steel pipes of indifference
    and numbness up my heart’s
    pseudo-rectum
    I’ve anticipated the discomfort
    but from what I see,
    it’s worth it.
    for the price of indifference and
    a bit of numbness…I’ve succeeded
    in eliminating any and every
    feeling I’ve had for you….
    sad to say…I’ve ended up eliminating all my other
    capacities for loving and liking
    as a whole…
    at the end of the day…I’ve lost
    more than I sacrificed.

    ~Signed,
    ~nowcynicalandjaded




    2008/AgAbus



     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every lick of this sound like my heyday
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... In order to eradicate her, you had to rid yourself of some of those special loving parts of you...temporarily. I think those parts do return, if we allow them to. Made me wince poet.
     
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    i am loving your style.. for realll
     
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    To be rid of all traces of you
    I'd cut my heart all the way out
    And consider it to be my just due
    worthy of the price without a doubt
    Free from all evidence of the past
    The years of loving you with my all
    Pouring out my soul until the last
    ....

    I definitely understand where you coming from right here. I loved the way that you crafted this. It was tyte my brother
     
  6. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vividly mind-blowing, had to gather the pieces of it, cuz it really did explode with feelin this one so much
     
  7. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brother and sister Poets....I'm humbled more than you know...thank you all for the support and love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Sister, the price we pay for success. smh...

    Love your work!
     
  9. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love poet.
    ya boi, Agabus
     
  10. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AgAbus:
    So this is how you do it....
    Man I wish I knew this about 6 shopping sprees ago...lol
    As always your poetic flare moves me.

    Much Luv
     
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