Black Poetry : private letter no. 3 (toJ.Christ)

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one better than

    u can understand

    how it feels

    to find myself

    selling my smiles

    and my heartbeats

    just to find myself

    wrapped up, tied up,

    tangled up in u…

    I must admit I’m a pheene

    for u man…u worked yo

    expression and left me heavin

    fo breath. I sho hope u

    recognize the sacrifice, the things I’m

    givin up just for another hit of yo

    wonder!

    lookin’ in my mirror…all I can thank is

    ‘He’s all I need’ dang!




    'House of Atreus' Publishing/2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ...... if i could only get one to see me like u see this wonder in
    ya space i could smile ......love the drop and private notes
     
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    Quite a testimony of devotion, scribe, I'm so glad you're sharing your work with us again.
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thank you both for your love and support to me. I appreciate you both greatly!
     
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    to live is to hopefully grow

    give praise

    what you need

    is all right inside of your person

    it's up to you to find it

    it's very difficult and people will hate you on your journey to find it

    peace

    good luck

    and pay attention

    to your surroundings
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo So'ja, this is truly a word from the Lord...i'm listening and i'm grateful! Thank you B.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this because it was so refreshing. Especially the last verse "He's all I need...dang" Ain't that the truth brotha. Thanks for posting this one.


    Mz.Soulll
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again...Mz. Soul...thank you for diggin me boo!
     
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    God's greatest desire...

    is to know that HE is all WE NEED! Trust in Him and lean not to your own understanding. This... is love
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aminata...thank you for diggin me mami! God bless!!!!!!
     
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