Quiet Poetry Lounge : Private Letter No. 1 (by her)

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna talk
    back to
    my past and watch
    it cry.
    i speak
    abruptly at times
    in the hopes of spreadin
    wild words in our mornings
    that will lend our night
    times smooth nouns that
    light fires
    and spread my pores
    full of smiles.
    u gon be my man
    after you look on me
    and see not a trace
    of the past. I’m present
    just moving toward my
    future…our future
    and I wanna move at break-neck
    speed, can you dig?





    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007​
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    looking back

    you can make corrections for the future

    and if love is involved

    then all the more better

    peace
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thank you for being in tune with me pa.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i can dig !!!
    keep moving upward breaking da mold
    and where there is love it's grand
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much brotha Rich!
     
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    To be able to look at love, fresh and new without all the baggage. What wonderful poetic thoughts, poet.
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you my dear!
     
  8. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Sistah....She did not shy from you
    I am Liking this...uh
    Maybe a Lil too Much


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