Black Poetry : Private Dancer

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  1. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~Short story with a poetic flow~
    "Private Dancer"

    Today is his birthday and a envelope has been special delivered to him containing 1 ticket and a note.
    The note read:
    "You have been invited to a private showing designed especially for you, dinner begins at 8:00 pm, please be prompt".

    Upon your arrival, you are instructed to follow a black silk ribbon leading to a box on a table. The box contain a black silk full length robe and a note that read:
    "Remove "all" your clothing and put on the robe and continue to follow the ribbon".

    Awaiting you in the next room is a special chair in a slightly lit room surrounded by scented candles in which you make yourself comfortable.
    I enter,
    bearing a mini maid uniform covering nothing but my nakedness. I present a tray of food, which I bend over and place on a table across the room exposing myself to you, I look back at you, looking at me, I lick my lips and smile.
    I walk over to you, you go to speak but I gently put my fingers over your lips and whisper "no talking", I proceed to deep throat you with my tongue, tasting the moistness of your mouth. I proceed to feed you the meal that I have provided for you, without a whisper. I leave you briefly to go and put on some soft jazz and return with a bottle of champane and a long stem glass.
    I whisper, "Showtime", and begin my poetic dance.

    I take my place on a make-shift stage I had made especially for your show.
    I begin to dance so seductively, making mental love to the air...in and out my body flow to the rhythm of the beat. Taking off the uniform slowly, exposing nothing but my nakedness.

    My body make love to your eyes as I grind,
    my hands roam the curves as I slowly turn
    backing towards you, swaying to the sensations
    of my own erotica.
    I bend and place a finger between my thighs
    stroking to your viewing from behind
    bending my knees, opening and closing my thighs
    and grind as if playing peek-a-boo from what's inside
    as I watch you continually rise
    I straddle you, rolling my hips, hands caressing my breast
    as you feel my breath on your chest
    I bend back, slightly rising both breast to be licked
    and continue grinding the shaft of your d---
    I rise to seize that pole
    as you willinly surrender to my flow
    I whisper
    dance with me baby
    feel it baby
    feel the pulsation of my beat
    feel the rhythm of my heat
    feel the fire of my desire
    as my body prance
    riding you with my dance
    you are my love master
    this is your day boo
    and I am
    your private dancer

    Juice
    (c) 2000
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    hold up ... let me catch my breath!

    WHEW!!!

    could somebody turn some air on please!

    :)
     
  3. alyce

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    *snappin, bofe hands high!*

    this is the shiznit my sustuh!!!! :)

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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where this sustuh@ y'all? somebody go find this queen!!!! Dizzam!!!!

    SWT
     
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    o' my goodness tyght flow wow!!!!
     
  6. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your replys to Private Dancer. I have been gone awhile and it feels good to be back....Desteeeeeee I missed youuuu sistahgulllllll :)

    1Love to you all
    keep the vibe flowing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't stay away so long we missed u sistah !
    glad ya back home .........sending love from above
    ya $$RICHNE$$ in flight one
     
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