Black Poetry : PRIVATE AFFAIR

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She..........
    was all he hope to be
    He............
    was what her heart dream
    She...........
    was divine of beauty
    He.............
    was life of charm

    Privately bonding affection
    like a radiant misty secret
    love blossome through miles
    of separation casting feelings

    She..........
    pose a glist deep and mild
    He............
    covers space wit comfort
    She...........
    offers her key to womanly volt
    He.............
    giveth his lovin heart & loyality

    Under gentleness and tenderness
    awaken the face of love to honor
    as togetherness cascade respect
    hand n' hand , body & soul
    mental mind touch without words
    ye' eyez see forth not of lust
    De mystery lingers unknown still

    She.............
    gallop a rapture of sweetness
    He...............
    forfilled da pleasure of wetness
    She..............
    becomes captured hypnoticly
    He...............
    lay mesmerized in her stance

    through distance shores of love
    abondedly they rise on da sea
    carried above, cross starz upon
    da moon filtered by shared dreamz
    two lovers borken vowz renewed
    in pathway of new light & reasons

    Privately the affair continued

    She.............
    still feelin him
    He...............
    yet not forgotten her
    She..............
    seem alone yet helded
    He................
    frown yet happy

    In the wink of moments
    they convoy under one stone
    and fall into a slumber
    awaken in da depth of this
    chamber four sided maze
    the love grew stronger yet
    not alive because it's private

    The affair acts continued
    leaving pools of tears
    and a fear of tomorrow that
    maybe gone forever

    was it sin she ask !
    did i fail my mission he ask !
    Privately answered in secrecy
    every kango beat like indingo drums
    banggin notes to come forth
    shameful not , mango bliss was born
    through a private affair

    casting cares , feelings , emotions
    became a target bodies weaken
    and hearts cry out for embrace
    he gave, she gave, all it was to give.

    I'M HAVING A PRIVATE AFFAIR HERE.
    :jumping: :luv: :happens: :luv: :jumping:



    A Dyamondluv Affair
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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She....
    in love
    he....
    loving her
    they....
    share and become one
    souls....
    touch
    within a PRIVATE AFFAIR HERE

    i loved this vibe very much My King
    a poet of love and heart of gold
    one who writes is as he is....
    this was tight and i like how you brought it!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A private affair, of a love so rare, in hopes eternity will emerge from there. Feeling this vibe, flow on poet.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I have traveled this road myself before. Tight drop indeed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel .....when it's all privately composed in rapture
    the heart & emotions of feelings leakz........

    thankz Watz .......yes as rare as it gets from the motion of love

    thankz python man u know what i'm saying ........
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...makes me wanna give love a chance...at least one more time...hot ta deff Sir $$RICH$$

    Love&Respect,
    DP2G
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    why not take that chance !!! could be a start of something sweet
    Thankz a million from da heart DP2G !

    Peace & love
    wit harmony..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Private Affair is the deep inner bliss one pose
    to love and not open the trails to be seen but
    it can't hide forever ....stay tune to pt.2 as the
    story poeticly unfolds to new love .........PEACE !
     
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    Your Private Affair was nicely done
     
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    hidden within the heart
    a rapture that can't be but is...
    i think I got one of them private affiars
    Yanno....
     
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