Jails / Prisons : Prisoner # 00GA0000901221

Discussion in 'Law Forum - Prisons - Gun Ownership' started by IfUComeSoftly, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I have the numbers correct...

    I see you from Reynolds
    I can’t believe you have
    More rights now in jail
    Then you did before you
    Killed that man and killed me

    I don’t know how you found
    Me here but you do know me
    We were married we were in
    Love….
    I see you from Reynolds
    Popping in and checking my
    Comings and goings now
    It has to kill you cause
    You can’t do a **** thing
    About it because you
    Don’t control me anymore
    That bond was severed the
    Day you raised your hand
    To me and the day you
    Left me pregnant to have
    That threesome in Jamaica
    That day I signed my name
    On the dotted line
    Freeing me from the only
    Ties that bind…
    I can't believe you
    recognized me or remembered
    the name of my favorite poem
    I can't believe you found me
    here amongst all these people
    But we met as poets
    of course you would come here

    I see you form Reyonlds
    I can’t believe you have
    More rights now in jail
    Then you did before you
    Killed that man and freed me
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very emotional piece poet
    kind of hard to read cause of the structure
    but i felt a lot of pain in this
    keep expressing your thoughts
    7/10
    uno
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the twistd pain of his onesided emotion
    and the inflicted unjustice from his hands
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of course I do not know you personally, but this piece was very freeing for me as I assume it was freeing for you. The is nothing I love more than seeing a person freed the the bondage that held them captive. Very moving, be free my sista be free.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, sista softly that's 2 in a row. I think I need to put you
    on restriction. You are starting to get beside yourself.:)

    Very nice write. I'm so glad your back so poetically strong.

    Much luv
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i glad your free

    not being held prisoner by the past

    and this is a true story is it not?
     
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