Jails / Prisons : PRISON DREAMS

Discussion in 'Law Forum - Prisons - Gun Ownership' started by daroc, Jan 31, 2009.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dedicated to my brother:to all our brothas....

    the hustle
    math the matic brain storm quick reflex
    jumping to numbers testing storm life skills fast
    never was this good with adding always
    until money hungry hopes drove long days
    still frozen on greed, guilt, and ambition
    dreams drilled into cell block corners forever
    too long ago were hopes believed achieved

    _______________

    bystander lost
    peace written strong willed black man walks
    life driven off impulse distract greed lust
    stagnate under pass freedom train de railed
    passer by lost in cause and possible
    justice renamed him turned wrong after right
    core hungry with pain from ambush past
    soul lost casue, life left him starving
    ___________

    jan 16th

    red summer has be came winter
    long days of despair linger closer
    lynched men in mental slavery prison now
    last chances to str8 line life over
    routed by GOD to do other work
    for gotten laws of trust,loyalty, worth
    lost- love needed. missed. wanted. now. ALWAYS!

    p.s
    love's rejection

    saddle bags full of emotion pull me
    trashed memory leave my soul empty
    reject every bodies' worst enemy temptin me
    thought love wasnt suposed to feel sensles
    mystery chills left scratchs on my soul
    pain addict xtracts purity but still falls
    cold cement never felt so familiar after

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....you left your mark on me deep
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    daroc

    Nicely stated.

    :)
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU dug deep...

    allow me to meditate on this, for a moment.

    as the river floweth.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read this, more than once, to try to make sure I didn't miss anything cause you tend to incorporate so much in your writing. This read like a whirlwind of images, like someone pressed the fast forward button, and the steel cage door slammed shut despite inaudible screams of despair. Penetrating write.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you for recognizig the pain

    and the problem

    with sistaz like you having "our" back

    that can't be all that bad

    i just wish it was more we could do

    but it seems prison in this day is related to the capital system we use

    it's a long story i know but you know what it is

    thanx again
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin' the performance factor here, daroc.

    You do time justice!
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK..... WELL ALRIGHT NOW, THAT NEEDS TO BE LAYED DOWN WITH A NICE BEAT!!:em0100:
     
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