Black Poetry : Prior Obligations

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad to know that she seized
    the opportunity
    to love & keep you
    prior to you meeting me

    I feel a need to be enlightened-
    no suprise cause I am somewhat
    oblivious and amnesic
    about your current domestication
    what's the deal, explain better
    your situation

    I'm in a quandary
    I'm perplexed;
    and bewildered

    what is the debt that you owe - to her
    wherein lies your responsibility - to her
    exactly how much does your relationships'
    necessity incorporate your personal liability
    or is it simply
    a lack-thereof

    I must say I find it disappointing to know
    that she holds you as collateral
    yet you look to me - curiously
    for unconditional reciprocity -
    ...you know...'you're seeing her,
    but you're dating me'
    an awkward and unpleasant reality

    What is you Prior Obligatory stance?
    Is your only obligation to her
    to be obligated and oblige -

    If that don't work out, brotha, just know I am
    here to present you with a COMPROMISE
     
  2. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    compromise

    the worthyness and compromise
    from the soul of ya heart is
    felt deep within me from tyland
    to nubiaaaa! where i sit looking
    at u........
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooohhhh ****!! (lol)

    sister dear!! i must say...
    you got down fa yours on
    dis one!! i love it... i love it...
    i love it!! (had to say it 3 times)

    flow on poetess... oh! & reciprocity
    is also one of those words i told
    you about!! :)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    Like whoa!!!! Kewl scribe lady!!!

    L&R
    GQ
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Thanx sista - for taking a minute to read this
    one for me...thanks also for inspiring me to write this
    piece -

    I probably wouldn't have wrote it
    if we haden't been instant messaging
    each other sharing "love & war" stories!!
    Right-Right!!


    Peace-n-Poetry
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heavy...Hmmmmmmm?

    blak
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    REAL Deep isn't it????

    Sho' ya' right!!
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Working On Somethin

    Sounds like a dangerous situation--Amun-Ra
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for stopping by again to read ME Amun-Ra
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    I'm glad to see that YOU posted up a reply to this one my dearest brotha!!

    You know I love it when you come out to play!!

    Thanks for showing love
    to your homegirl - "Ms. Minnesota Nice"
     
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