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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Jul 5, 2001.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me sip from
    the,-
    vessel of your composure
    wallow in
    the
    scent of your aroma
    taste
    the
    aura of your eyes\
    be drunk with
    notions of
    potions
    of you divine.

    Your smile disrobes me,
    dissolves all pretense of control.

    The sight of you makes me
    struggle..
    puts my thought process
    on wobble,
    my modus operandi flounders,
    jaws drop in freaked out wonder
    at the way
    you-,
    sip on a straw-
    toss your
    hair in the wind
    cast the shadow of your
    lashes
    'neath the
    layers of my skin
    I remember
    every angle we carressed
    every contour dripping sweat
    hearts mocking at forget
    in a song not full sung yet

    Let our love go neck to neck!!!
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES, YES, YES

    and the poem is excellent too!!!!!!!!!! kinda lost masef there.
     
  3. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you much,

    I wrote this for my wife a little while back.

    JAH Bless
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well like I said

    excellent
     
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    Dang Ubzorb...

    I felt myself get lost in this piece too!!!

    had me mesmerized...closing my eyes to regain composure:eek:

    Yeshujah
    What a beautiful wife you must have:)
    I can't even imagine how this must have made her feel...
     
  6. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Afri

    she is a remarkable person, from whom I have learned a lot.
    Thank you for reading the poem.

    Love always. It is the greatest.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIZZZAMMMMM!!!!

    U GONNA MAKE EVERY LADY
    TOSS THERE DRAWS AT U,,,:lol:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice jewel for your wife to wear mentally...
    very nice dedication to the woman you love.

    nfinite
    from the garden..
     
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    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank yous.

    RICH, you're too funny man. Thanks for coming in on this.

    j'hiah, I appreciate the read and comment.

    Thankx.
     
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