Black Poetry : ...princess' slumber...

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  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking of you is a combustible combination of
    gifted hope and longing…
    your voice trapped in my ear piece uplifts
    and circumvents through my dream space
    and I feel I just might be
    …thru…
    what you’ve chosen to show me answers questions
    which have been left floating…
    silver lined pillows of my
    …what may be
    …what could be
    …what should be
    …what I deserve
    are you what I’ve prayed for?
    That doorknob’s turned so
    I guess that now’s my chance to walk through
    into the daylight(?)
    perhaps
    welcomed by the moon’s sight(?) and pure vision
    pocked with mischief and grace
    It’s pure happiness to consider my mental thighs
    spread by your
    vocal *****
    (****…I just feel so “on” right now)
    Ridin your vibe your’e like a serious space invader
    …syllables locked and loaded
    and
    I’m trapped by their night vision infra-red purpose
    as I lie
    cloaked by nothing more than darkness
    …not like my Princess and the Pea me
    but like my
    Sleeping Beauty fantasy
    in wait of my true prince to free me dream
    and
    with my eye’s shield tight your image comes clear to me
    …darkest eyes piercing and reading me
    The brightness that surrounds them
    a pull back to the core of your mindset
    the vividness a metronome of consistent feeling
    …feel me?
    You say you adore me
    cutting through the darkness so
    adorned I lie in my pool of terse energy
    for your hand to softly calm me awake





    2002 ALLME
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh mos def

    Dahlin' please lie adorned!!! Magnificent art... I love what you do with words!

    Stuck in your dreamscape
    Reas
     
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    I agree with reason...magnificent!

    1:heart:
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everybody ain't able to write the excellently!

    spbowing
     
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    Oh I just love this peace....you have used the beauty of the spoken work so beautifully....and the ending is so nicely done...

    K
     
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    I really enjoyed this..........great write
     
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    beautifully written
     
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    Nice.......
     
  9. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YALL!

    Reason ~ always...lol...thanks sweetness.

    Twofish ~ thank you...!

    tps ~ always appreciate words from you luv! thanks!!

    Kitana ~ thank for stoppin in sis & your compliment!

    UL820 ~ i'm pleased that you enjoyed reading this! thank you

    PoeticAlize ~ Thank you!!

    SistaMoon ~ thank you for shining on me!!
     
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    lili.


    & i ain't even mad atcha! :D

    i was feelin' your flow & wavin' my hands
    on this one heah, hun! i've been there...
    & it's all very good... enjoy it! :)

    itsallLove.
     
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