Quiet Poetry Lounge : prime jewel

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She flash a smile
    so radiant & bright
    she sparkle like da
    starz into the night
    she rise like da moon
    fulfill any emptyness
    she is a black pearl
    of essence
    a perfect comfort
    she pose a beauty
    of heart so sweet
    she is caressin & meek
    she shine like da sun
    a glow as a diamond
    and open her soul like
    a gem
    she is a prime jewel

    A Mayflower rose
    she is a shelter to
    man and one who
    understand
    stand tall so he
    don't fall and give
    her very all she is
    the beauty to see
    and warmth to feel
    she bring forth da fruit
    of life and a treasure
    a rare gift from above
    a true Queen of love
    she is a prime jewel

    so her worth is more
    then one know
    she is the happiness
    a heart of gold
    she pose the ribbon
    of hope and da body
    that's no joke
    she wave in compassion
    and fill wit affection
    with her is a great way
    to direction and she is
    a treasure of pleasures
    A Queen
    A woman
    A Lover
    A friend
    her values is high
    her misguide is low
    she is da prime choice
    a rare JEWEL
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: awe man speechless
    this was posed so well wow
    awe richie rich.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed sistah y'all worth more then man can express
    i luv my black strong sistah's without y'all we just here
    with y'all makes man complete .....Thankz for the visit & love on dis
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took me with this one
    from beginning to end
    thank you as well :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside a flow is a story
    with that story lay truth
    Thankz again
     
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    When you've found a jewel, youve found a true treasure. Very lovely write, Rich. I'm sure the sisters appreciate this.
     
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    yes sistah watz it reach out to express the worth of a woman a Queen
    her deep blk soul and the joy she bring to a heart of man
    surely every sistah that cross this should know this for them as well u
    many blessing my dear .......Thankz a million
     
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    Yes, ..I am, I am, I am

    Yes, a true queen of love is who I am
    come $$RICH$$, gently...take my hand.
    cover me with rubies, diamonds and pearls
    fly me away, to a different world.
    where only live Kings and Queens of love
    and sit on high...my THRONE...above.
     
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    indeed surely ya a Queen of essence and a heart of gold
    da radiant of beauty for ya love to hold Thankz for the visit
    to the land of truth
     
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    Rich, you have the poetic magic touch...
    when it comes to love...
    as always... :toast:
    A winner...
     
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