Black Poetry : Pride

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by OLMEC, Dec 30, 2002.

  1. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    Tameka's hair **** near
    touches the middle of her back
    jet black as india ink and
    hot comb straight

    Tameka smiles like a girl
    half her age with rosemary cheeks
    and karat gold fronts

    and this is the smile that she inherited
    from her mother
    and this is the smile her daddy always
    wanted her to have

    and this is Tameka combing her hair
    in the mirror in the morning
    suprised by her favorite song on the radio

    Tameka smiles like a girl
    half her age

    with rosemary cheeks and karat gold fronts

    and this is the smile she inherited from her mother

    the smile her daddy always wanted her to have

    -OLMEC (aka Mookie ...Return of the Renna!!!!)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome wit such beautiful flow
    welcome in da house u know
    welcome upon family & friendz
    welcome to DESTEE'S PLACE
    here is da love u trace
    glad ya here flow on and share
    and warm welcome from above :D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this one it was sweet!

    Beautifully crafted and a nice flow...nice imagery...welcome to da show!

    Blessings on Ya House!
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice first drop

    welcome
     
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