Black Poetry : Priceless Jewel

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do I say this completely,
    while attempting to say it discreetly?
    For, there is a spectacular thing, to me, that you do.

    You engender a feeling so pleasantly delightful,
    with each and every ear, and every eyeful,
    When opportunity creates a moment with you.

    From my heart, I can genuinely say,
    that you exhibit a capability to brighten my day,
    despite what every misfortune I may be going through.

    Your smile is arresting, and always-on time
    it is always compassionate and kind,
    in a world that can prove to be so coarse, so cruel.

    There is a power within you possess
    with which you have truly been blessed,
    My negative energies you conquer, and you subdue.

    I’m glad you’re here I hope to stay
    Because, you are my bright spot day to day
    In all my gray skies, you are my absolute blue.

    At times, I spot a photo I see your eyes
    These become the moments I realize
    Wherever you are I want be; that is all I want to do.

    For each moment I’m around you
    It is a precious moment, which I value
    As one would a fine painting,, a priceless jewel.
     
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    this was great thats all i can say..
    nicely posed...:angel1:
     
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    oh this is so sweet
    ahh yes
    touching
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad it was enjoyed... thanks for reading
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ur on key tyte flow keep flowin
     
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    this is cute:D
     
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    You added the right amount of sugar to make this sweet.
     
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    priceless jewel what a good way of describing someone so close to you. This is a nice piece
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again to all of you for enjoying my expression with me
     
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