Black Poetry : Prevail in code bazaar like a railroad car roll down tracks

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Prevail in code bazaar like a railroad car roll down tracks
    And hold brown Mack Tens cats see my gun and frown whack//
    Devastation in cities like an investigation committees need
    A clean-bill-of-health, ill and deft then be witty and proceed
    To write that which excite// beat microphones with rhymes
    Make domes shine like glass polish and abolish with nines//
    Even pop one with a shot gun shoot birds they pollute herds
    Of automobiles dropping **** from skies just some flying nerds//
    Trend is funny and feely make me spend money freely now broke
    My check wrecked like leaky ships, freaky scripts are jokes
    Write tall art went to WAL-MART it was sparking hot
    From the store to the parking lot mini-skirts marking the spot
    Saw a brown cutie with a round booty it was like renowned nudity
    Hips slick and alert doing the lipstick flirt wanna go down do my duty
    Built great want silk cake she’s just milk shake like Charlise
    Her juice be swell and produce the bells in my ears like the Far East
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NIce pieces!!! Flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya speaking here whewwwww!!!!!
     
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    nice drop....enjoyed the read my brother
     
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    i like that...check

    more then just a peck from a beak
    the the intelect from which i speak is limited
    but never weak...the vision of which most seek
    is tainted and durdy like a garbage heap
    a quantum leap would be needed
    before pathways were clear from being impeded
    yo foes get defeated so i gotta reckonize da heathen
    and da same snakes seethed....i got da power like he-man
    like a demon i bust caps at g-man...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the responses for real yall
     
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