Black Poetry : Pretty

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 22, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel so good

    So good

    I love me

    I love me

    brown eyes,

    Brown hair,

    Tan skin

    My smile

    Can go a mile

    My eyes can sparkle

    Make you happy

    So long as you are feeling me

    Vibrant

    happy

    Real

    Magical

    Love being me

    Beautiful Black Queen

    Skin the colour of the sand

    Lips the color of the rose

    Feel so good

    From my head to my toes

    No body knows


    So good

    Like chocolate swirls

    Smells of coconut, banana

    Carmel

    And apple melon

    Sweet

    Drowning in victory

    Free

    Free

    Free

    Tip toe tip toe tip toe

    To the beat

    I wish everybody could feel like me

    Queen of the Nile

    Sarangetti, Cleopatra

    Afroditi,

    Me

    Clean

    Colour Purple

    French pastries

    Mmmmmm

    Good.

    Pretty

    Desert Storm
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this here...................

    nothing more atractive to me than a women
    with confidence
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks , I like this poem 2!

    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lawd. lawd! ain't nuttin more "brewtiful" than my sistas...please believe me!...lol

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    Glad you feelin dis one G. hee hee hee
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmm!! beautiful one !! lovin my tan & lovely
    nice flow of u in whole
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Glad you waz feelin dis, my intoxicated brutha, hee hee hee
    "happy feelings"
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sis u pose a gem that sparkles like Diamonds
     
  9. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, you're flattering me!

    Stop it! YOU
    hmmph! hee hee hee
    Now I can't concentrate!
    Desert Storm
     
  10. NittyGrit

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    as i read this poem
    i heard the moon whisper
    a breeze
    and felt your soulful essence
    free.......free

    I appreciate your art.
    NittyGrit
     
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