Black Poetry : PRETTY PEDALS OF ROSES

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FROM THE ROSE FROZE IN BLACKNESS
    SHE MAKES ME SMILE
    SO SWEET
    SO SELFLESS
    SIGNIFICANT SISTA
    SAVORY SISTA
    SAVE ME SISTA SIZZLE ME FREE
    PRETTY PEDALS
    STAINED WITH TEARS
    FROZE IN BETWEEN THIS RECKLESS LIFE
    AND
    THIS VERY SILENT DEATH
    SHE WAS LOYAL
    BUT NOW SHE MAKES ME CRY
    PASSING THROUGH
    FOR THE LAST TIME
    HOLDING EACHOTHER IN THE MIDST OF THIS LOVERS LIGHT
    LOVING LIGHT
    LIGHT OF COLOR
    OH
    LEGITIMATE LIGHT OF LOVE
    SIZZLE MY SOUL FREE
    PRETTY PEDALS OF ROSES
    BREATHE VIBRANT BREATH ON ME
    OH PRETTY PEDALS OF ROSES
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave: and welcome
    this poem you drop
    has indeed touch me
    wonderful peace
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done lovin ya style and how u express da inner of ya soul
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "FROM THE ROSE FROZE IN BLACKNESS"
    This line set the tone for the rest of the poem. Keep this flow going.
     
  5. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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