Black Poetry : Pretty Baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pretty baby
    Wal-mart lady
    Sexy beauty
    Hottie, duty
    Window shopping
    All you're worth
    Sweet and pretty
    Help me first?

    Puttin' on...
    The platinum card
    Precious, can you
    Break this yard?
    Tea for two,
    My fantasy-
    A fine tooth comb
    Be calling me!

    Pretty talks,
    As pretty walks
    Wal-mart,
    Know I'm on the stalk
    Trippin' cause,
    I'm coming back
    Wonder if...
    She's married jack


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ATENCHHUNN

    lol one poet u done did it again!
    yet another masterful flow
    love the scribe gives off a
    gooooood vibe
    just askin that u keep doin your thing
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1poetsought i am loving ths flow...smooth..nice
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice flow 1poet...I liked it a lot :)
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1Poet,

    Very nice piece!! I am liking it very much!!

    Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe smack down !
    bruh u out did ya self wit dis hot flow
    loved it !
    mo....mo.....mo...!!
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, 1Poet...you really captured my attention on this one! This was smooth!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY, VERY SMOOTH.....Just like you!
     
  9. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1 poet
    Feeling you flow.... this was a nice piece keep expressing yourself

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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