Black Haiku : prepartion meets dedication

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my preparation
    exceeds the expectation
    with exclamation

    my dedication
    till final destination
    no expiration
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dedicated glist
    motion for preparation
    unbound behold you

    No exclamation
    on da power posed within
    none expiration
     
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    a leaf taught me life
    floating away from its tree
    to dance with the sky

    even though it knew
    its dance would be its demise
    it lived til its time
     
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    Final bell soon chimed
    The great has exit lights now
    Soon the crown will shift

    Dedication all
    Then realization came n
    Preperation forms
     
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