Black Poetry : Preparatory Girl

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  1. zrod1987

    zrod1987 New Member MEMBER

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    I'm your Preparatory Girl
    The one you mistreat
    The one you don't appreciate
    The one you leave

    I'm the girl who put up with your bull
    Twenty times too many
    The one who though that when you said you were sorry
    That maybe this time it would be different

    I'm the girl who placed you above herself
    The one who thought about you always
    The one who never complained about anything
    But yet the one you played

    I'm the girl who watched you give away all her privelages
    The one who even after all that would've still given you her all
    The one who cried every time she thought of you
    The one who still jumped every time you called

    I'm the girl who slowly let you crush her world
    The one you hung to dry
    The one you dogged out
    The one you made cry

    I'm the girl that you left
    Without a care
    The one who watched you love someone else
    But love her you wouldn't dare

    I'm the girl who after awhile left you alone
    And closed that door
    The one who finally realized that you were wrong
    And that she deserves so much more

    I'm the girl who watchedd you give that girl everything
    The one who saw between it all
    THe one who sat back while you thought you were in love
    The one who waited for it all to resolve

    I'm the girl who watched you get played
    And felt no remorse
    The one who saw you in pain
    Caused by an outside force

    See I was your preparatory grl
    Mistreated and underappreciated
    But stronger than before
    Preparing you for the Karma that was knocking at your door
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow. You know, I truly believe that Karma will get cha, and usually when you least expect. You were the girl who learned to love herself more, while karma ate him to the core.
    That was fire. Welcome to Destee. Give love tyo your fellow poets, as they give love to you. Hope to read more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scirbe , i'm feeling every word of this ......whewww
     
  4. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    this is pure hotness!!!!! I love this poem:uzi: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    say it poet

    what goes around comes back around

    you just don't want to be around when it does

    lol

    feelin' your strength and determination here
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Papi...Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yo this is the hotness...know that this brotha right here is truly diggin yo craft more and more!
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im loving this one so much, u just don't know
    this was tyte and on the real
    keep flowin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had to let y'all feel this one again
     
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