Black Poetry : Premonition

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    never thought
    in all her days
    that her bed of passion
    would become a grave
    she sits and wonders
    with her legs spread open
    how to conquer the pain
    with no horses or trojans

    magnum sized emotions
    tempt her to cuss
    but she’s trapped in the rapture
    of a casual ****
    and if that reality was brazen enough
    shards of hot lust still drip from his head
    drowning her in the memories
    that swim across the bed

    there they lay
    lifeless
    not only the memories
    but the man and mistress
    his sweat was cold
    against the treasure chest
    that she hoped he would cherish
    like he did her breast
    but he still didn’t care enough
    to notice her heart beat yet

    the arch of his back
    was the sexiest
    strong with a chocolate endlessness
    but the smoothness of his words
    had an arrogance
    that softly whispered textured hints
    to beware of his sandpaper caress
    for it was a tender prelude
    to how rough things will get

    his forehead
    was covered in foreshadows
    she was too naked
    to cover her battle
    scars
    already opened up too far
    so she stopped fighting temptation
    and let him loot her heart
    it was a sign and turn off
    how he dismantled her bra
    intuition said he’d leave her the same way
    broken apart

    he woke from his dream
    in search of a cigarette
    she felt overlooked by his habit of neglect
    he sucked the smoke with satisfaction
    slowly becoming more
    and more unattractive
    with each drag she felt painful fragments
    crumble inside her
    and fall like ashes

    she was right

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    this took me in like a story of a unknown venture.......enjoyed this Nitty
     
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    NittyGrit, your contribution is invaluable. You might have sold this peace for profit. Thanks for sharing
     
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    a portrait well painted, my friend...though, the heat has simmered somewhat.

    good to read you, again.
     
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