Black Poetry : premeditated karma

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    If there is a witness in the forum tonight too….
    That noting succeeds like success
    Say yes!

    If this world is an oyster, then I came to eat it out
    Until it leaves scratch marks
    All around my neck

    I guess we all know people who couldn’t win
    Even if every one else in this world conceded and forfeited
    If god gave some people Micheal Jordan’s talent they would just lay up
    And not be able to score with it

    But because I love u

    I’m about to do things with this poem that none of u will ever forget
    My brothas
    U will leave this poem tonight with your brains hard
    My sistas
    You will leave this poem with your minds wet
    Make
    No
    Mistake
    That the man who writes this
    Is
    A
    God

    My sistas no need to twist up your faces
    My brothas no need to nod
    Just read from me
    There is energy surrounding me like skin
    And when this poem here tonight ends
    I want you all to come closer to me
    Cause I am now qualified to show each and every one of u
    How things are supposed to be
    Our supervisor has authorized me
    To give each of u insight 36 degrees of exactly
    What your soul controls

    Now I would be remiss if I didn’t show u how to put candle wax in tops
    And shoot scales with miaat to do cannabis with ANUBIS and use feathers to measure heats to smoke angel dust with angels and hit meth with Metastopholies while other souls fall victim to prophecies for improperly trying to copy the signs and symbols of the galaxy
    Their fallacy is in their analogy they’ve become over dependant .on technology
    Instead on using their minds to shape this reality
    But u
    U have created me …..
    To poetically show u what u need to see
    But that u have called me into existence
    There is no such soul as tha hookupman u see
    Your mind has placed me on this forum
    At this hour
    on this day
    To show u things that u you have already suspected
    be but needed psychosomatically suggested to u anyway


    If there is a witness in the forum tonight.
    That noting succeeds like success
    Say yes!

    There are those people make things happen
    Those people who watch things happen
    Those people who find out what happen thru
    Destee’s soap opera im digest

    I quess we all know people who couldn’t get a life
    if they was giving them away free with traffic tickets
    its sad to say but some people are stuck on failure
    Like adolescent boys are struck on pornographic pictures

    But my be love it
    None of us are made out of any special molecules
    Every molecule
    Is infinite
    And all things found outside it can all so be found within it
    So in that since noting is ever created or invented
    energy just changes from form to form
    they say the only thing new in this world
    is the history u haven’t heard yet
    The only advantage other souls have over yours is the mathematics u haven’t learned yet
    It is thru mathematics that I have collected these degrees
    Is it thru mathematics that I
    No longer need a ….j.o.b
    It is thru mathematics that I had the audacity to hire 3 employees
    And check this out

    I still don’t know what it is that I do for a living

    The one thing that permeates this existence is balance
    And those of us who succeed at 180 degrees to each challenge
    We think, walk talk and interact to the intermitted frequencies of the galaxy
    And those of us who fail.. fail because we refuse to use our minds to redesign this reality
    They put their lives in hands of the universe like dice , then look surprise when the universe hands them back snake eyes

    If there is a witness in the forum tonight.
    That noting succeeds like success
    Say yes!

    God could put a big fat yellow halo over some people’s heads all day
    And they would still refuse to believe that they where blessed
    I quess we all know people who couldn’t prosper even if u gave them 50grand on consignment
    Them fools would prolly go out and get them a platinum Rolex
    Get robbed for it and spend the rest of their life’s wondering where the time went

    Success is never a mistake it is always ….premeditated karma!!!!


    hookup :time: :thanks: ..
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang..its funny cuz i was jus writng on sucess.... i loved ur realness... and "jokes" as well. u spit some real ish. 360 degrees of knowledge.tyte drop.hookupman
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word !
    flow head folks listening
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the depths of this....We each have what is needed within us to thrive, yet having the right stuff, but not knowing what to do with it, leaves us wanting, and behaving as though we never had it to begin with. Feeling this more than you know. Flow on brotha.
     
  5. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dig that....

    Once again Brutha HookUp has brought it to us folks,

    This brutha knows who he is...

    :teach: TEACH !!!


    Much...
    Peace & Love
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  6. 1poetsought

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    For real though... digging this high minded Hookup!
     
  7. angelicsage

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    Our need to be “freed”
    Has brought you into existence…
    And now…your spirit’s soul resides in each of us
    Your genius is blinding…each word gleaming
    Like a starry sky…above northern lights
    Your beauty and ominous prowess of righteousness
    pours over your words like…water glistening on a rock
    As the light of your message shines down like the sun…
    Causing it to sparkle…
    As your reader experiences re-birth…only to be re-born and then re-born
    Again…
    After each hit…that you spit
    Baby….this was Magnificent!
    And I am…so addicted
    I hate to sound cliché’…but Baby
    You’re deep…and u know it
    You just keep me... loving you :kiss1:
    Sitting at your feet love…sitting at your feet
    Waiting for the moment…when again
    You speak…Ahhhh yes
    …this piece is mmmmmmmmmmmmmm mm mm mm :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:

    :couple:
     
  8. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Karma

    Excellent Write.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I say "Yes" ...to each and every line of this. What a wonderful and very insightful piece.
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have said it once i will say it again
    You are the perfect match for your honey lol
    This one maaaaaaaaaan o maaaaaaan lolol
    I was smiling bigger and bigger with every line lol
    CHEEEEEEEEEESIN lolol :D
    I beez da witness :read:
    (here on da poem and @ da wedding QQ hehehe)
     
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