Black Poetry : Pregnant

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miss-no-love, Mar 3, 2005.

  1. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guess what?
    I'm pregnant, yes I'm having your baby
    and I aint the only one who got to take care of this responsibilty
    You see you helped me make this, I didn't do this by myself
    You said I wouldn't be alone, you will be there if I needed any help
    now you want to neglect me, want to forget how I told you that we are having a baby
    You want to forget about me and our situation to tend to yo' girlfriend, but I can't get mad cause you told me you had a lil' wifey in the begining.
    No, it's not bout you and me, it's about our seed
    it's about 8 months from now being a father that my baby really needs
    OH HONEY! I don't want you, you already know what you got to do,
    be there for yo seed mentally, finacially and emotionally too
    and I feel sorry for your lil wifey cause she fell in love with a sorry excuse of a man
    I bet she didn't have you getting me pregnant apart of you and her plans
    S*** it wasn't apart of mines either.


    Again this is ya gurl miss-no-love tell me what you think
     
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    the depth of birth of thy seed to love
    everyone must stand up and take charge
    of new life i hear ya on dis one...........
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay, I'll tell you what I think...
    feeling sorry for the lil wifey is the wrong one to feel sorry for, it's the husband's mistress ...who's gonna feel the sorrow. The moment it was revealed to you, that it is, not was...but is a lil wifey...
    "The door should have hit him, where the good lord split him"
    ...and that's a natural fact.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think the poem was good:)
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes :hearthis: he has to take responsebility cause i work with children everyday and with the ones who have no father.....


    i,m sorry for you sis....but stay close to god..
    its going to be alright..
    Stay treu and honest towards him(god) and he will guide you..en show you what to do...
    express ..writting is good ...dont keep it inside asspecialy during the pregnance
    cause the baby is comming rather he is going to be there or not...
    If he is a man he will eventualy take his responsebility...
    (i feel ya had a close girlfriend who went trough the same thing )
    but as a sis i have to also tell You sis :love:



    :hearthis: i hope you keep youre respect for the wife cause i see some sister getting mean with and towards echother because of the man.....
    while the woman doesnt even know anithing about it or isnt the fault...

    now you are free in expressing in Poetry so dont change anything...
    i wouldt to even if the world told me ....cause that is freedom of speech and poetry....


    but i just said this because i saw ....."".LIll wify"" and i just hope you dont envy eachother.....

    I hope everyone here is mature enough.....
    the one who is not...
    Lord will eventualy kick that persons butt...




    much love and guidance to ya sis :heart:


    and to the little one........










    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  6. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I said Lil' wifey I meant a serious grlfriend, thats a little slang thing we use up here where I live at and you are giving great advice but i'm not pregnant i wrote this about a friend of mine i will make sure she will read what you had wrote again thank you for the advice
    thanks too all of yall

    1LOVE
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a child enters the picture, it changes so many lives. This poem is a good example of that. Flow on.
     
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