Black Poetry : Predater Unseen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by scropian7, Dec 4, 2003.

  1. scropian7

    scropian7 Member MEMBER

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    He holds a
    butterfly knife
    in his hand

    He's not shy about
    using it
    his prey is
    right
    in front of him

    oblivious
    to the danger
    hidden from his
    veiw
    about to wreak
    n ruin him
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa!!!
    now this was awesome mastering really like da drop
    on dis scribe flow on !!!!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word dad, ROCK ON!!! :flamet: LOL
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    i likes this whoa nice scribe flow on...
     
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    ah yes
    digging this
    nice drop
    Peace
     
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    smooth...the intent..
    and mindset of a predator
    captured so well

    I'm with story on this..."Rock On"
     
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    Whoa!...Not the "butterfly knife!" He 'bout to de-bone/filet!

    This piece made me feel like I'm watching a movie and I wanna yell out, LOOK OUT!...."RUN!"


    Good suspense!



    And :birthday:
     
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