Black Poetry : precious

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so precious you are to me
    more than the treasures
    of the earth
    rare among women
    and pleasant in your ways
    you are the waters
    that run through
    a thirsty land
    the tree of life amidst
    hell and desolation
    incomparable you
    life unto my soul
    the sweetness of my sleep
    happy are those in your
    presence
    just to be around you
    a wonder of wonders
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe
    i'm lovin it peace bruh!
     
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    You breathe life
    Into the lifeless
    If I am the tree
    That life springs from
    Then you are the stream
    That feeds me
    Quinches my thirst
    With your purity
    Heaven and earth
    Can not compare
    To your handsome face
    The face
    That comes of my dreams
    You bring warmth to all
    That know you
    And smiles to our hearts
    So privileged to read your words
    Which reach and touch
    My soul
    :heart:
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry, I just had to... so sorry... didn't mean to butt in.
    Your poem was so lovely... truly warmed me.
    :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: :heart: :heart: :wave:
    No "sorry's" needed
    my thanx to You!
     
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    nice flow...
     
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