Black Poetry : Pre-Meditated Murder

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deathly hallows frolic in the night walking along as his shadows

    Armed and no warning no sighting of an alarm

    Never do I recall his friends speaking with such charm

    Is it real or disillusioned authenticity?

    No insight to see through but this is 1 of many questions

    With no answers

    To observers the great unknown is that the devils atonement has arrived

    In the eyes of one so pure an allure

    A tragedy he doesn’t believe in the idea of a utopia reality

    The coward in the lion crying because he dying

    Life is all good but let it be known he’s really lying

    And being lied to in the safety of his comfort zone

    Done already checked out of home

    Delusional residence in a hatrit filled bubble

    Hypocritical messages contemplating one or the other

    His thoughts leaning towards the latter

    As his platter is empty n even He offers no substance

    Contemplations about this being it

    And if so its beginning were fabricated from birth

    A real shame if it resulted in death
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it would............... great mental message
     
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    thanks
     
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