Black Poetry : PRAYER / PEOPLE / REALISM

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PPR.
    Through whispering windz God permits​

    thy celebration of morrow but we linger
    in the death ear of his praise, so-lo-ly
    i pray upon the landz mountians forth
    trouble and hate become bannish from
    hearts that we , our people join handz
    an obligation to mandates the gift of
    life we own and that a freedom from
    obsession that folds and hold poverity
    be delivered into the weckage destroyer
    O' spirits thy voices of ancestors
    shatter the shackles that cling da mindz
    ova da naked mound of thinking to our
    civilization and help heal the landz
    in your Name Great Mystery i pray

    People let thy strength be felt , heard
    through our unity as that standing
    commitment without abandoning our crown
    become the people of quiet exclamation
    like a crimson blossoming knowledge of wise
    and the wisdom of great forefathers,receive it
    accept it, live by it, and stand in honor of it
    let our minds be ambition un-tamed yet
    controlable where there's no limits as we
    conquer fate , wipe out white wash , let all
    anguish explosion become our Glory of wonderment
    trails of blackness awareness and exquisite hope
    as one love rise in the fist we present
    my eye shed a tear for our victory as people
    this my dream foretold as we recollect & engage

    Grasp the truth of realism bewilderment as the
    beat of thy hearts that betrayal lives , dat sorrow
    endow us , our struggle lingers , divided we are
    now as people we still lost in the place of america
    in da sympathetic muscles of fears oppressed in
    the light to emptiness, the lose in da shadowz
    compromised of better days i dearm of , to be free
    under sweet symphony silver harp and sonnet tune
    as the earth rumbles in joy, the sea rock in waves
    the sky shy into dimple blue, man standing as Kingz
    wo-man standing beside him as Queenz
    life gate opens to equality,hate falls under pride rock
    egos clash , spirits sing, food divided cloth passed
    warmth given , love is not foresaken , the helms rise
    people grey falls youth lingers new birth live
    colorlism if thats a word coloratura as coruption dies
    capitalization falls to a knee for clemency
    Victory i dream to see, despair nolonger is so we may
    laugh in merrily oneness as the movement continues .

    A Dyamondluv Creation

    Nu-Wave PPR Production
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    Da $R
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, This was wonderful...
    Tight piece....
    Keep doin' you....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz a million Soblessed for the lovin support
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was right on time rich keep them flo's coming ok. ok.:hearts1:
     
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    Wow that was a deep script
    I was loving this drop poet
    Nice realism
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u Nevar and Tantrum
    just doing my part to voice
    our struggle to give hope through
    the word .

    peace & harmony
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only we could live in harmony such as this, well maybe, some day. Thanks for giving us thoughts of unity to ponder.
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So deep... Strength in unity. Strength born from the struggle.
    Rising from adversity. Man this had it all.
    One Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed watz and someday it will stand , we will rise and unify.
    thankz for the lovin support

    thankz skrybble7 truely our strength lay within as our struggle
    continues from mental slavery but the rising sun is abound our
    destiny to free will and equility rights the next birth ...............,
     
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    $$RICH$$...

    This here reminds me of that picture/poem: "Footprints In The Sand":sand: . Lo and Behold.....the depths of your soul. Touching piece.
     
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