Quiet Poetry Lounge : Praise of sonnet vol. 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jan 14, 2005.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He came down to me...

    for he spoke
    i will take the pain away

    my child i take the pain away
    within the vallyes of lost
    through the fire
    i will take the pain away

    he came and spoke to me..

    stop searching over there and over there
    let me take your pain away
    heal all you worries
    and watch the darkness fade away

    see he spoke to me...
    no longer alone
    for the sun shines in the dark
    he took the pain away
    my worries are gone
    for the love surrounds me

    and i look back and said

    this time i wont give up
    i will fight
    i wont give up
    for he took the pain away

    c) 2005
    Poetry Praise
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautifully posed i love it enjoyed the feeling of this piece
    continue on
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fight on, sister, as it is the only way. Diggin this piece.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written, and so relative.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling u moving in this praise
    keep on keeping on sista Angel
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    what a blessing
    to be pain free
    what aa blessing
    to be....
    nicely done...
     
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