Black Poetry : POWER of your SEX

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Aug 5, 2008.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The result of spending too much time on Mr. Meta's thread. lol

    Anticipated your arrival and dreaded your departure

    Oh how I wish you had a pause and rewind button

    So I could pause you when my body can no longer

    stand the rumble of your thunder

    and rewind you when I’m ready to embark

    the journey of you all over again

    Touch so strong yet gentle to my skin

    Kisses filled with erotic electricity

    Drenched me…

    The mass of your physic feels like a feather

    On top of me although your 6 foot 3

    It was my delight to climb and crawl ever inch of your tree

    How did it feel to have putty in your hands

    to knead mead and mold to no end….poke me stroke me

    As you envolk me with your energy

    ****….its been quite a while

    Since my boat has been afloat since my senses have been

    Aroused and prowled

    As I sit here and replay every act and scenario in my mind

    your every move your every touch your every kiss

    Again I’m lost inside your elements

    never wanting to exit this kingdom of extacy

    rigorously yet delicately you proceeded to

    Inject me with boltz of passion rendering me

    speechless…..breathless…..motionless…….

    and you have the nerves to ask baby can I taste that

    unable to comprehend this level of pleasure

    I wanted to tell you, no more can I stand

    you have depleted and totally cashed in my orgasm account

    but yes is what faintly slipped from my lips

    because I have been sexually spent

    as I bask in the glory of all that is you….me…..and us….

    I know without a doubt you have completely turned me out

    and I’m lovin’ it

    I was watchn that clock all day like hickory dickory dock

    Please hurry up your tick tock

    So I could get to my play date

    I know you think you got me but its all good baby

    Because I could feel my engery within you

    So thats mean I got you too

    I hope you can handle the truth

    Today has come again and as I sit here

    mind reeling staring at the ceiling

    My body still twitchn and tingling

    Every move I make takes me back to the engagement

    of our intimate session of senual body blessing

    got me totally confessing

    The POWER of your SEX​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can be difficult to put into words just how powerful it can be, but poetess, you have captured those moments, making the reader reflect upon their own...lol. Well done.
     
  3. soulosophy

    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL 4get the power of sex, the power of these words had me in a zone...captivated my imagination..whew!!! Excellent write sis :)
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....whewwwww!! this was some hot read and powerful Shhhhhh!!!!
    do da thang sis
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    whoa, I had to step away from my system for a minute so i could get my thoughts back in order.....

    this is 14, 072 degree's Hooottttttttttttt................

    :flamet:

    I'm on my way back Luv............
     
  6. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You layed that picture out so vividly that I felt like I was illegally sneaking a peak...

    Excellent flow Sister 4Ever!!!!
     
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    LindaChavis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Love it !!!!
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    Thank you ever so much.
    My mind has been in some
    interesting places lately.:)


    sista soul:
    I kind of went there with this one...lol
    and oh how fun it was. Thanks for your
    luv and support.



    $$RICH$$:
    Thank you thank you, I knew
    you would feel me.:)



    info:
    14,072 degree's Hooottttttttttttt
    That's pretty Hott..... You apparently
    are not afraid of FIYAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    LovesDestiny:
    Thanks for checkn out my flo.
    But isnt is always more fun
    when you think your sneakn...lol


    LindaChavis:
    Hello...I havent had the pleasure of meeting you,
    thank you very much for checkn out my flo. Its
    always nice to see a new face visiting.



    Much Luv to you all
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    words can do this masterpiece justice

    WOW!!!!
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SWEET



    I really love this flow.. I can't help myself.. I'm gonna explode....

    Uhhhhh.. oh yea.. uhhhhhhh
    If I promise you 4EVER would you accept my love?
    When you want me to slow
    Whisper… feels so good
    That is my queue that this love making should never end

    Having you like putty it just confirms
    Your tender soft sweet body
    Against my body strong and firm

    The power of us both
    EXPLODES in Ecstasy​
     
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