Black Poetry : power less

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    sayin good-bye
    is never a joy
    it makes you confused
    even after u thought
    you were, so sure.

    you feel so strong and
    in control, when you feel,
    you got the words and you know
    exactly how you'll tell it.

    but forget it
    cause if you love them
    you'll regret it
    and they'll be bitter
    and you won't feel better.

    you'll be grieving much like
    seein' the sun setting
    but it looks like its leaving
    irritated, you are , like a baby
    teething.

    so u pick up the phone
    the next morning and say
    baby, im sorry im just confused
    by the talk shows, the therapist and
    the news.

    and

    u go one to further explain
    how the world tells u how to love
    but the bible says the truest thang
    and u've decided to follow its saying..
    cause the world , is pain.

    but by then, they are cold and quiet
    and your body temp drops
    and your words get stuck in your mouf
    and no sorry will meke their heart mend

    i knew i couldn't survive
    being the first to say good-bye
    so stupid on my part
    don't know why i even tried
    now we both cry....






    :( :( :( :(
     
  2. renee31127

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    :crying:
    but forget it
    cause if you love them
    you'll regret it
    :crying: so sad
     
  3. true love

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    dayum...you hit the nail right on the head with this one...this has happened so many times...it's a terrible feeling.
     
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    MORE, this is so right on the money. The flow is really good - you make it sound great.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt ......saying goodbye make u cry in the end
     
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    MORE this was felt to the point where i was like this...:eeek: to this :cry:
    whew *blowin my nose*
     
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    tight flow MORE
    very deep
    Peace
     
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    MORE.. You come so real. I really like your insight . Keep it flowing.

    " sayin good-bye
    is never a joy "
     
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    enjoyed the read
     
  10. MORE

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    thank all of you, this was from the heart, and for as much as i thought it was the right thing to do, now im dealing with a man's ego, and he is angry and resentful. :crying: :flame:
     
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