Black Poetry : "posterboy..."

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Nov 30, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....didn't know how sour chocolates were
    ....how bitter roses smelled to her
    did l pick the thorns, or the wrong candy?
    whoa.. my badd..
    she needed me to- show her, not tell her...
    but how could l??
    she sees my potential and how definite l get on
    corporate and social issues....
    but her?
    she has cried rivers and all l had to offer... was tissue
    just maybe once she'd want to see me cry...
    illuminated tears on bulletin... of some emotion
    she sees me... a sensitive lover under a wool cover
    maybe.. she'd want to see me ask "why" so she can assure me that
    l don't have all the answers to life's questions
    or maybe she'd like to see the side that's not so rude
    she knows there's a laiback attitude under the shell..
    a different response to debate than "go to hell"
    o.k
    she's right
    she knows my darkness but feels my tunnel of light
    and maybe...
    she wants to see for herself just exactly what she means to me
    and she will..
    the sign says "the difference."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir yes sir she will know it too da different
    tyte jam
     
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    indeed..i likes this..and she will know...:angel1:
     
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    She matters enough to you to try to make adjustments. I enjoyed this flow.
     
  5. blakverb

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    This is felt bruh, ndeed. Nice flow.

    blak
     
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    this is very nice ....feeling your depth from the heart
    Peace
     
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    Show her what she means, brother.

    U got the picks-her (picture), now show her the U she wants.

    Tight piece.
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx famlee...
    'sall good.
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i see the message heyah, very nicely done, dear poet.
     
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    j'hiah once again you got your scribes down beautifully..tyte flow:)