Black Poetry : Post-shower

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Viirse, May 29, 2001.

  1. Viirse

    Viirse Member MEMBER

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    The shower head gave birth

    she was cleansed of the days

    remnants

    that took residence on her skin

    and she moved in a

    circular ballet

    spinning my thoughts

    around her hips.

    (c)2001 Viirse
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Virse

    And what a cleansing experience this
    must have been for 2 souls to view & feel!

    Very well done -- leaves room for the
    mental to wander....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very cleanful thought
    wet spray of love
    makes my mind wonder som' where else:)
     
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