Black Poetry : ...possibilities...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LiLi, Oct 17, 2002.

  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    killing me softly
    with a voice smoooth ...
    silkier than the emporer's robes
    crimson & royal bluez ...
    my slide is stimulated
    by your guide to
    hitch my hip in the
    direction of the west
    in it's salmon & violet
    end of days set
    causing my imagination's
    flow to harness the first
    rail trail to your door...
    will you welcome me as
    in my dream?
    ...as you've suggested?
    or am i simply
    caught up in my
    "love me"
    not
    "love me not"
    role play
    and when your eyes
    first touch me
    will i be familiar
    of their
    ...penetration(?)
    which is
    (as of lately)
    so often brought to my ear
    through lines stretched
    above ground
    that...heavenly kinda connection(?)
    will your life's purpose
    (if even for a moment)
    surround
    and
    comfort me
    tape measuring from
    my toes to my highbrim the fit(?)
    will it
    not read into
    but
    understand my
    hearts situation(?)
    and will your chest swell
    in pride of
    this opportunity given(?)

    as i lay serenaded
    by your
    breathing sounds
    question i ask
    due to...possibilites etched
    by...conversations well spent
    answers...i truly don't expext
    but
    oh...the possibility....
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice lili - the possibilities are endless I presume

    1luv
     
  3. elayne.

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    lili.


    mmmhmm! this was nothin' if not delicious!! :)

    ...possibilities, huh? well... i would delve deepa
    into that... but i'll just say... i loved the way you
    flowed all ova the page with this one heah!

    thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is a daydream of sorts? no

    anything is possible
    with thoughts like this

    nice art work poet

    DSS
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

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    Possibilities... Great word!

    A beautiful & enjoyable peace.


    Coco :heart:
     
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    Every day of life always holds possibilities, but your dreams of them hold the beauty. Wonderful flow.
     
  7. LURK

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    wow mami...
    i gotta go wit so'ja on this one...
    anythang IZ possible
    with words like these....
    tell it girl...
    tell it like they aint never hear it be 4
     
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    yo this is nice....
     
  9. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAPPY, HAPPY TWOSDAY DESTEE FAM!!

    Twofish~ yes they are and thank you for your response!

    ms. elayne.~ thank you!! delicious?? lol yes it is!! thanks hun!

    DSS~what up general??! lol this is a daydream of sorts? yes...
    thank you for your support as always!

    cocobutterskyn~thanks, hun!! that word always makes me smile..

    Gaylee~awww..thank so much!

    LURK~LOL...thanks sweetie!

    j'hiah~yo thanks! lol thank you for checkin this!!
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LiLi

    Your sentiment is absolutely lovely!!! This poem affected me like that dear, inspired a brutha and alla dat! I seriously dug it from beginning to end... hope I didn't take away from it by posting my reply!

    Lovin your language
    Uh huh
    Reas
     
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