Black Poetry : ...possibilities... (Inspired by LiLi's Poem~Yall gotta peep her's first)

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  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...possibilities...
    Huh?
    Softly killing she
    Howeva in back~thought
    It was she who subtly killed he
    With eyez more beautiful than a
    Skyline from a mountain view
    Dark and just deep enuff
    2 dive into
    and skin thatz ridic(u)lously addictive
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    soft enough to make a baby’s ***
    beg to touch her
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    soft enuff to make the Rose respect her
    as Queen Flower

    and the petals pedal her scent in reverence
    &
    ever~since
    my
    reflection holds 2
    I and U
    captured from
    A hallucinated point of view
    & likewise I’m caught up in a
    “love you”
    “love you not”
    love who?
    ****
    “how could I not”
    when seduced by
    these voices in my head
    conversations with her sound
    painted on my mental canvas
    He
    And
    She…
    Animating possibilities~

    Reas


    All Rights Reserved
    Reasons Love 2k2
     
  2. LiLi

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    lol...i love this!! this is an added benefit and i feel very much honored that my peace inspired you dear!! thanks for your response to mine by the way...stay easy!
     
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    you are soul dayum badd at this love poetry ****!!!
    Please pardon my french, but I can't help myself
    your dope poetry has that effect on me...


    Still sprung :wink:
    Butta :heart:
     
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    kinghead.


    i read lili's version of possibilities & fell in love wit
    it... now here your raggedy *** comes... improving on
    perfection. but i know... that's just your way!! :D
    i love-did this... & it was extreme-ly pleasurable to
    read you one mo' gin... you just don't post enuff, man!

    itsallLove, chile. (4Life)

    elayne.
     
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    although i didnt read lili's first i love this and will read hers

    next

    great poem
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, dear poet. this piece just floats, asallofyoscribesdo. smiles to you, dear friend.


    ~~~fromyonumberonefan~~~
     
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    4 real reason i gotta hand it 2 ya. U know how 2 luv a woman and how 2 please her every sensation. I like dat flow.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    Thats jazz
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo get you play on playa

    4real

    DSS
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fam!

    I believe it was the inspiration that made this peice what it iuh... Serious Respect and a lil bit mo fa LiLi!!! Thank you fa dat slim, thought your peice was brill and it Definitely effected me like dat!

    Butta~ I still cherish your words.

    Rykah~ High Five Sis!!!

    Elayne~ Improving on perfection?!? High comps ma... Thank you!

    LP, you gotta check herz out! it was like that!

    Lister~ im speechless for some reason...lol

    Aaliyah... are you willing to testify to that in a court of law??? lol

    Blk Thunder - Play it slowly

    Street!!! you the truest dog!

    Madd Love yall
    Reas
     
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