Black Poetry : Poor Michael Jackson (I don't give a [email protected])

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...it doesn't matter if your blak or white"
    that's what Michael said/but if you're a priest
    I guess you can touch kids/and don't have to worry
    about doing bids/but/mike probably did touch those
    kids/but/honestly I don't give a ph...uck/
    see mike's been strange a long time/and grown folks
    got to know better than to let your
    kids "kick it with strangers"...but really I don't give
    too [email protected] on a wednesday if he did...but what if
    he did? who really gives a [email protected].but it is a [email protected] good question/
    one that if you ponder on too long you
    may start to believe that it was the Man in the Mirror
    that was telling kids to Beat It...yeah that was Bad...
    "...yo Butt is mine ([email protected] I can't sing)
    but/ mike probably was singing that song on a Saturday
    evening while watching Shrek with little cats in their
    underoos...while sipping on some sirrurp...[email protected]...Mike
    that's an old verse to an old song/say it isn't so/bro?
    but/who really gives a [email protected] about mike's escapades?
    he's a grown *** man/with a ton of issues right now/
    what blak man doesn't have issues?/but....shhhhhhhhh!t
    not issues like that unless your R.Kelly/but/that's whole notha
    story on a whole notha vibe/at least that brother believed he could fly/
    but/I guess mike could walk on the moon/and own the elephant man's bones/
    and the entire Beatles catalog/and make his nose the
    facial equivalent to ground [email protected] that was cold/but what
    black man would want to own the "Beatles" catalog/
    unless he was an investor/in that sense it would make sense/
    but mike just wanted the music because he could/
    but like I said who really gives a [email protected] what mikes into/
    and I pray that they don't mess up my sports with court coverage
    of his issues...

    I have enough my [email protected] self.

    :donttell:

    (c)2005 blakverb's "Blak Verbs"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smh.........sho ya right !
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess you must be a pretty big fan of Mike since you utilized your time and thought process to write a poem about him.

    What Mike did to you cuz?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like just yesterday Mike and his brothers seemed normal and looked normal, and now, well, I hope he didn't do it but if he did, God help him and his twisted soul. You put some brutal one liners in there brotha, lol, this was smooth.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, thanks brother for the hit.

    Manasiac,

    brother, I been around this site since it's inception. However, I haven't been around lately so you don't know how I flow. Brother, I write on anything and everything. If the muse comes so be it. Time? I didn't spend much time on this at all, 5 minutes max. Dude is a talented cat with issues. Fan, yes. Of the creative proccess and he's a creative brother...with issues. To answer that last piece Mike didn't do a thing to me except, for a moment give me something to write about.

    Peace my brothers,
    blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz,

    I hope he didn't do it too. But as the old adage goes "where there's smoke, there's fire". It is scary, the transformation that that brother has gone through. It's funny because this piece began as a political piece,in mind, but evolved into what it is now. Thanks for the response.

    blak
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am sick of the whole spectacle too, blak. This is a tight ayuss poem.
     
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    I'm saying, let your child kick it with a 40-sumthin y.o. single eccentric, may not be politically correct, but U asked 4 it.

    I'm with U bro. blak.

    Peace.
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot piece blak, respected the piece and the responses, well said poet, well said.
     
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    lol@ yo butt is mine....hahahahahahaha!
    dang dude...that brought a tear to my eye...
    tyte joint son...
    one love
    khasm
     
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