Black Poetry : Pondering

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind ponders the days that has yet to come

    Thoughts bring me to the time that you laid with me,
    Listening to jazz records, while enjoying a bowl of ice cream out on the hammock.
    The lips that I know so well meet the dip of my neck
    That is cupped by my shoulder and collarbone
    Amazed at how they fit like a pair.
    I watch your back in the distant as you take our bowls to the kitchen
    And think to myself “how did we get so lucky?”
    You return with the throw from the couch and…

    My thoughts come to an end until the next time

    My mind decides to ponder.
     
  2. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...I like the mood. Listening to jazz, ice cream......... What more do you need?
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice likes this vibe
    it was smooth
    flow on :angel1:
     
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    very nice...the flow is steady..liking this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice serene scene, keep flowing.
     
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