Black Poetry : Polyesterdaydreams

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She scatted herself into existence…
    Out the silence of Polyesterdaydreams
    Sight of 70's sequined gowns…the sound
    A jazzy-Funk-a-psychedelic fantasy
    Of fire-spewing dragonflies
    With rose petalled wings
    Soaring through Orchestra halls
    Above the din of her angelic voice
    Godly thunder sounding
    Yet gentle as a breeze in spring
    Her riffs become mental spliffs
    Which eventually will
    Emancipate your mind, your *** will follow
    For the freedom of heaven is within,
    Within the stillness between each sound she utters
    In which time ticks
    Allowing flowers the moment to crave
    Natures dance of floating Flutterbys,
    And bumbling humble bees
    To virilely seed the fertile
    In which time tocks
    The speed of bleeding sweat from conjoined lovers
    Like rain falling upon each other
    In covetous curious poses
    In which time has stopped
    For each moment… For each moment
    For each moment is the beat of heartbeats
    Advancing the zealous repeat of copulatory actions
    As the sound of verbal explosive discharges of
    Neuromuscular tensions at the height of carnal stimulation
    and her scat once again begins
    Or is that ends
    For her scat is the end of the beginning and the beginning of the end
    The before, the hereafter equaling forever
    birth-making love-bathing census-taking one plus one makes three
    Supreme diva liberates mental bounds inspiring love sounds
    To what some refer to as heavenly organized noise
    That wordless rhythmical articulation
    That fluently reaches the depths of souls
    Harmonizing vocal to syllabic syncopation pulsation
    Filling and fulfilling eardrums
    Eargasmically pollinating body, soul, heart and mind
    Climaxing a polyesterdaydream opus sublime.

    Nah’shon-Rae 9/27/2003
     
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    Nice flow.. Polyesterdaydreams a time full of new beginnings and things long gone.

    Like you said.. a parlimentfunka-delic-bootsy-mothership situation.
    Alias spit don't make no babys.

    " For her scat is the end of the beginning and the beginning of the end "

    " The before, the hereafter equaling forever birth-making love-bathing census-taking one plus one makes three "
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe brutha speaketh da truth
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum....
     
  5. true love

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    nice flow...much love
     
  6. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am glad you liked this piece Hodee, Rich, Story, & True Love
     
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    Eargasmically pollinating body, soul, heart and mind
    Climaxing a polyesterdaydream opus sublime.

    Love the journey this took me on...Excellent writing and imagery!

    Encore:spinstar:
     
  8. Nahshon

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    thank you angelicsage...I am so glad you enjoyed this piece...
     
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    word...
    this was ill son...
    you need to keep hit'n us off
    with dime pices like this...
    phat concept
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    oh my nice flow