Black Poetry : Polarized: The Beauty and The Unpleasant

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    im feeling your style of writing.....
     
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    And through it all, we must learn to have some kind of balance amid the yin and yang. Tight write poet.
     
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    Like your use of visual stimulants
    Very descriptive
    Like when the hemp starts filmin' on its own.
     
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    hi Brother DSS
    This is deeper then deep
    AS I read your words
    I was feeling the truth in your release
    A change is coming. It has to comes
    It is indeed strong warriors like yourself.That will
    make that change happens we will unite and stop
    this madness ..much love


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Mmm, Mmm, Mmm!

    How profound! Thats all I can say!!!
     
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    Was feeling you when you said, "I must live in the present" Hope is hard to kill, the spirit immortal and eternal.
    Let no one kill your spirit, Let no one.
    Feeling ya mad luv on this piece, you goin make it thru. SPEAK LIFE!

    Real TRUF
    and
    Thank you,
    Desert Storm
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you poets

    thank you nevar, um you've been bringing heat lately too

    so true watz so true and it's even harder when trying to balance extreme poles

    thank you for your comment one nine

    thank you bluewater - this is how i see and feel it change is change i'm (we) this

    is all part of the same equation thank you again sista

    thank you HOPE that's all i can say lol hahahahahaha you know i had to mess

    with you lol

    thank you DS and same to you don't let anyone break you beautiful spirit

    so glad you hung in there with me

    peace poets
     
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    i likethat you tackled this piece and did it so well............ one can write bools on this subject.

    great write

    Patrice
     
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    Oh yeah... yea my brethren, I say yea!

    I really love the work here, so metaphysical in nature, and so TRUE.
     
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