Black Poetry : point of view

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, May 7, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    from my convo,
    you might
    think I'm preoccupied
    with the goings on
    between my thighs
    but oftentimes
    what happens is
    you're seeing with
    blinded eyes
    because your mind
    is closed to
    the thoughts
    I convey
    and your ears are
    not listening to
    what my heart
    has to say

    so whatever I
    mention
    gives you rise
    because your sole
    focus
    is between
    my thighs


    hadassah
     
  2. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooh

    so, the view from his point isn't a good thing, dassah? :D

    I feel you, tho!

    mojo
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i missed that, yo'...

    are you saying that the happenings aren't between your thighs
    ...that that one betta recognize
    that all things taken in with the eyes
    aren't all there is
    but, hey...i realize
    that to touch the core of a being like you
    you must braze the mental with words that's true
    i don't know those words
    i can't be that one
    but i recognize beauty
    ...know how to have fun.

    let me know when he's done.:)
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    hadassah i love it gurl !!!! :lol:

    go 'head Sis !!!!

    hehehe

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooooooooooooo MY GOODNESS !
    well

    nough said !
    Go head girly;)
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speaking to one who has spoken of thighs:

    "Part your legs gurl...and bring the wisdom!!"

    *drumsticks*

    :p
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL WELL NOW

    WHAT LAY BETWEEN YA THIGHS
    IS JOY IN A LOVE RIDE
    YET ONE NOT HEAR WIT EAR
    MIND ON THOSE THIGHS
    DES WO~MAN FEAR
    THE SHEER BEAUTY SPREAD WIDE
    AS KNOWLEDGE SPEAK................
    GURL I FEEL YA HERE .....TYGHT FLOW ;)
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Between your thighs
    Bodies rise
    Well now
    Alot of brothers main focus
    Nice piece poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let not the small head be the biggest thinker. Tight write.
     
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