Black Poetry : Point My Pen ... At Your Heart

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am unsure as to whether
    I get my point across
    but I keep writing to you anyway

    I keep writing

    wr eye t in g

    Pointing my pen at your heart

    and...
    When meanings are already hidden
    should I continue to H
    I

    ...D

    E


    them?

    Should I keep it to myself?

    Should I keep you to myself?

    What is it that I am going to keep for myself?


    ????

    If it is personal,
    must I code what I say?

    I speak my mind
    and my heart

    he art

    Verses serve a purpose
    so, do you think I made this up?

    What do you think?

    Do you think ? What about ?



    about ........ M E

    in the early morning hours
    - the beginning -
    when daylight first appears

    Am I the D .......A W ...........N
    you search for

    or am I wrong?

    My only wish is to find my
    heart, which is he
    ...you know what I am talking
    about... because you are reading
    me

    L O U D

    and

    C L E A R

    yet ...

    at one time I wrote out of
    lonliness and into it

    now I point my pen at your heart

    This is another aim at convincing
    someone who already takes an
    interest in me to be interested in me...

    You may stare into a blank space ...

    Perhaps you can not decipher
    what you see?

    Perhaps you're in love with understanding?

    We are attracted to each other
    but only for what we both know
    in composed

    P

    R

    O

    S

    E

    S

    and still ...

    I pose questions as if there were
    a camera ...


    ... Be Still ...





    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES

    N 2 YOUR SOUL OF HEART
    U R HEARD AND FELT
    IT'S YO LOVE 2 KEEP
    U SET A BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY
    AND OPEN MY MIND UP ...........:heart: :)
     
  3. amirah

    amirah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply stated...

    and "heartfully" laid out...Enjoyed reading you
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    touching

    talking from the heart..
    this deserves some answers...

    K
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Thanks papi ... for your continUous support! Your wordz are definitely appreciated & don't go un-noticed!


    One.
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amirah

    Thanks for the comps ... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Kitana ... thanks for the read & your reply! Yes, this piece does deserve some "ANSWERS"! :D

    :lol:

    One :heart:
     
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