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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blank paper
    empty canvas
    ink filled pen
    hand & mind
    from vision
    to memories
    pain & tyme

    Transformation
    expression kind
    substance
    dreams
    line by line
    scribed
    in subjects
    of emotions dat
    shine

    Testimony
    circle eclips
    improvising
    through da
    technicolor
    of formation
    performing paradox
    and images
    of life and beyond
    gives birth to poetry.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful interpretation of poetry $$RICH$$.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u , Poetry is ink and pad
    by the hands and mind of emotions
    what's felt and what's been delt
    that bring forth life of a poet............
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    now that's some real abstract poetry right there RICH....i love the rhythm and images, the syntax..the approach...

    you display such versatility.... a fresh drop witnessed right there....
     
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    one day i hope i write as good as u do :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big Thankz abstract , i'm trying to stay in the poetic game .

    Unforgettable thank you and guess what your artistic flow is within thee
    i know u can and will so let me feel ya pen sweep the canvas..................
     
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