Black Poetry : Poetry...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 18, 2005.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You see me and poetry tied the knot
    of forget me nots
    To have and to hold.......
    until death do us part
    Well that sounds smart
    Clever
    Or Whatever
    But poetry does not require a signature
    Or license
    Or a spoken word
    No nouns
    No people
    No actions
    No verbs
    see......
    Poetry does'nt even need words

    See my heart beats to the rythum of poetrys drum
    echoing it in my mind
    But sometimes I wonder...
    "Who stoped the drumming?"

    Or is poetry an illusion created to share the emotions I bare?
    But I don't discharge
    Discard
    Or disregard
    The life line that connects us two
    So I just do as poetry would do....

    Because I can still feel poetrys beat echoing in my minds and telling me all her secrets and desires
    So I tune into her station and pump up the volume a little higher.

    She pumps her emotional self centered self into me soo much I now tend to speak of myself in third person
    Python's mood swing starts to worsen
    Sometimes Python starts curse'n
    See I'm doing it again....
    Speaking in third person.

    But sometimes I think poetry is cheating on me and telling my secrets
    because...
    I swear I go to spoken word joints and hear other poets speak it
    Naw poetry would'nt leak it
    And you might ask me how do I know but..
    Shhhhhh........
    It's a secret!

    Now you see there are too many people pimping poetrys
    Potent
    Profilictic
    Profound
    Pollitical
    Passionate
    Powerfull
    Polluted
    Pleasureable
    Pictured
    painful
    partnership
    without paying their dues to it's pathway

    See..
    I like my poetry Intelliictal
    I like my poetry sexual
    I like my poetry deep
    I like my poetry to seep...
    "Into my minds eye"

    I like my poetry to stimulate
    I like my poetry to imitate...
    "Lifes transgressions"

    I like my poetry strong and profound
    I like my poetry to tell me life's not the same.. when my small part is not around
    "but she moves on without me"
    I like her submissive
    I like her agressive
    I like her throwback
    I like her Progressive
    I like her god fearing
    I like her child rearing
    and just smearing....
    reality into my fantasy
    and
    fantasy into my reality

    fuseing her gemini nature
    into my mentality.

    Poetry can take a quote and throw it into the ocean
    Where the quote will float within it's motion

    Now how deep is your souls sea?

    Well I guess mine is as deep as Poetry!


    caramelpython
    2005
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Python, nice piece
    I like this.
    I feel where u coming from.
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot my sister..much love n return.:geek:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Poetry can take a quote and throw it into the ocean
    Where the quote will float within it's motion"
    Whoa...it's line like these that made this piece stand up and shout. Thank you for writing so potently about poetry.
     
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    Hi Brotha Python
    Yeah B-More in the House
    Oh this is sooo like wow:rolling:
    I had got so caught up
    in the vibes I was smiling
    and laughing,the passion of this art
    Is A Love Affair YES !
    this was just so (I'm lost for the right words)

    I read it from the top down
    and then from the bottom up
    and it just felt so right each time
    Yeah Poet
    Whoosh I'm still caught in this flow :):jump:


    Peace
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight 2 def that the country talk coming out of me. in other words you got it going on my brotha. flow on.
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No let me thank you my sister..your comments are always a welcomed addition to my works:geek:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I pleased that u enjoyed it my sister Blue.. U know how we B-more peeps need to stick together.. If I have to swim in the waters let it be as Blue as u my sister! :toast:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :fyi: Thanks alot Nevar feeling ya country vibe.:geek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all man snap crackle and pop
    u drop this one butta smooth
    str8 grade A....Pythonnnnnnnnn!!!
     
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