Black Poetry : Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Mar 18, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry
    Don't leave me be
    Got to have some you
    Here with me
    Got to have it
    Got to pass it
    Or i'll go crazy
    How many tabs
    i've dropped
    How many joints i've copped
    i really Don't know
    It's up in the air, i'm hazy
    It's really so and so
    How much i do per day
    It all depends on
    How much that in that day
    i Can get my mind and hands on
    There aint no stopping me
    If you want to get hurt
    Obstruct my way to poetry
    You'll get leveled
    Moved bedeviled
    Verbalized
    Totally ostracized
    It's a thousand pound ape
    This here Jones on my back
    It's like Superman's cape
    Or the perfect rock a crack
    So if you don't like it
    i suggest you gone and jump back
    i'd hate to see you hurt
    Or laying bloodied in the dirt
    But i aint responsible
    For what i might do
    To protect my stash
    i'll annihilate you
    i'm hooked on doin' it
    i'm makin' and growin' my own
    yeah, git ready for it
    i'm poetically totally blown
    you sittin' round me smirkin'
    Now how you gone act
    Better watch yourself
    Gittin' too close to me
    You're movin' toward a contact
    You and me
    and Poetry
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my goodness
    you are rocking this one here :)
    nice very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this vibe
    love it
    flow on
    yes yes yes
    nice drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, I really liked this. Nothing like being hooked on that poetry vibe, stay hooked my brotha.
     
  5. GYMEFORTE

    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    YOU GOT THAT (JONES) TO !!!
    NICE JOINT !!!
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i feel the same why my brotha
    keep talkin...we are listening
    one love
    khasm
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that kind of :luvv: for what you luv...I can feel it. and I'm not the one to get in your path :fight: of rightous-ness :lol: you got my respect :lol:
    you go on and do you...like I know you will... :jumping: on...with ya bad self.
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "It's a thousand pound ape
    This here Jones on my back
    It's like Superman's cape
    Or the perfect rock a crack "

    Most wonderfully expressed, brother.

    This thing of ours is a serious habit.

    There's no other I'd rather have.

    Peace.
     
  9. Kamau~

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    poetry is heavenly...this was what i was trying to hear tonite
     
  10. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater, thanks, you know it.........

    mzblkangel, thanks, yes let's continue the vibe and flow....

    watzinaname, thanks for the encouragement......

    GYMEFORTE, yeah like you and the others, i got it and it got me......

    Khasm13, thanks and i know it................

    queentswana, thanks, it's mutual....

    PositiveMindset, Peace back atcha and it is thankfully serious......

    Kamau~, glad it was right on time.........
     
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