Black Poetry : Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jul 18, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my words
    my lines
    my emotions
    my rhymes
    poetry
    takes hold of me
    its exhileratin
    intoxicatin
    gives me peace of mind
    til i reach and find
    a new thought to release and write
    its excitin
    kinda frightenin
    how i type out my innner me
    that no one ever gets to see
    yall know more about me
    than my friends, family, and enemies
    its so relaxin
    how can i explain this passion?
    it heals me from my daily distractions
    whether im happy or saddened
    i can write til i have nothin left in me
    but thats okay, cuz more words will eventually
    come into my cerebellum and nest in me
    til i write some more about this life and the rest of me
    u have no idea, how much i enjoy it when it gets in me

    ur words
    ur lines
    ur emotions
    ur rhymes
    ur poetry
    also takes hold of me
    its amazing
    heart razing
    to know yall feel me
    i know nothin bout yall lives
    but every1 of yall stay real with me
    when u give ur advice thruout ur flows
    i can say most of it grows
    with me
    its soothin
    quite movin
    to know most of u been thru just as much as me
    so i know im not alone, but reluctant see
    i come on here to read and reply
    and dont have 2 worry about what's or why's
    its just there
    pure and bare
    but full of emotions that grab my attention
    and take me to ur world of life learned lessons
    and for all this...
    i respect it.
     
  2. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok

    I loved this poem keep your pen and computer working.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back girl....i'm really feelin' this...
     
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    I loved it, I loved it , I loved it!!!!!!!!

    This was by far one of your best, It was so fresh and so true to form a Masterpiece , so I concur with the other scribes ...Keep on flowing chile, cause in the flowing is the knowing!

    Blessings On Ya House!:toast:
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u Earl, LovelyGoldenOne, and msluciousb. it feels great to be back...
     
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    You just took me to your heart! I love this here!
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks purplemoons
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful and thoughtful as always, baby girl.
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u as always gempis
     
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    We know the effects that move mens hearts.
    Keep sharing your wonderful gift!
     
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