Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Nov 26, 2008.
Woke up in a daze, to the sound of his boot,
thought I had to change into my mary fields suit.
I just knew this mad man had done flipped his lid,
or done found the booze that I secretly hid.
bout to take me a drink with some iodine lace...
if I hear one more sound...I'm catching a CASE!
I enjoyed the flow that poetic sounds of
the morning stirred in you.
Thanks for sharing your mood with us!
only YOU would brang domestic violence into the fray
GREAT POEM BRO. K
very spiritually entertaining
I love the description in this piece: Rhythmically, Poetically beautiful.
I love the rhythm of it and the vivid descriptions
While Keita woke to poetry, I'm relating with Queen on this one
great writes - interpretations of the same morning - Too funny!
Good poetry happens early morning
This is a great write
awesome beautiful scribe and QueenT look at u alwayz bangin wit dem hammers
Brother u out did yaself on this drop fo real i enjoyed it to the last drop
What a way to wake up, enjoyed the creativity in your flow as always keita. And queen, well, I always look forward to your replies, lol.
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