Black Poetry : Poetry Woke Me Up This Morning

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  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Woke up in a daze, to the sound of his boot,
    thought I had to change into my mary fields suit.
    I just knew this mad man had done flipped his lid,
    or done found the booze :drink:that I secretly hid.
    bout to take me a drink with some iodine lace...
    if I hear one more sound...I'm catching a CASE!
    :hammer:
     
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    Hello Keita...

    :wave:

    I enjoyed the flow that poetic sounds of
    the morning stirred in you.

    :)@queen


    Thanks for sharing your mood with us!


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Queen

    only YOU would brang domestic violence into the fray

    GREAT POEM BRO. K

    very spiritually entertaining
     
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    Keita Kenyatta,
    I love the description in this piece: Rhythmically, Poetically beautiful.
     
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    great piece
    I love the rhythm of it and the vivid descriptions
    Write on!!!
     
  7. Zulile

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    :lol:

    While Keita woke to poetry, I'm relating with Queen on this one :lol:

    great writes - interpretations of the same morning - Too funny! :lol:
     
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    Great flow
    Good poetry happens early morning
    This is a great write
     
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    awesome beautiful scribe and QueenT look at u alwayz bangin wit dem hammers

    Brother u out did yaself on this drop fo real i enjoyed it to the last drop
     
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    What a way to wake up, enjoyed the creativity in your flow as always keita. And queen, well, I always look forward to your replies, lol.
     
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