Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulosophy, Feb 8, 2008.
let it keep talking sweet
lifting da hand that speaketh
in the tales of truth and da way
let ya pen continue by day
get up on da move groove
i see u flowin smooth
Wow ssalaams89! This was great! I am a new fan!!!! Your word choice and flow was just off the chain!
Yes it does and U definitely do.
Its been said, " If you build it, they will come".
You've certainly put in the work, and you're right,
Poetry can speak volumes ~ without uttering a word.
I admire your work, ssalaams89
This Poetry of yours is.........Spirit
I do not mean has spirit
I mean IS spirit
This is the height we All need
I am so happy you shared greatness
because this was great!!!!!
I am filled with grace in you presence!
Dont stop the FLOW!!!
peace my sister
Greeting the pure Light in you all. Thank you and Bless you all for the Love on this piece. In reality, anything positive and good that emanates or comes from myself is ultimately from the Divine Creator. (A little reminder to myself, can't have my ego getting the better of me) Hotep fam!! May your Light remain illumined!
Thought I already responded to this one, but glad I'm responding to it now. Words so eloquent and sweet, so touching and full of warmth. I am quite taken by the beauty of your words.
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