Black Poetry : Poetry Reloaded

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 19, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay
    Im ready
    Here comes the ammunition

    Im hot like fire
    Molten lava
    Sparks that fire
    Flames that torch
    Causes bonfires
    Burn all tires
    Feel desire
    Bring the heat
    Cut bobwires
    Chock them liars
    Rip the weak link
    Snatch attire
    Haters cower
    Taste so sour
    Use a coward
    White as flour
    Fight my power
    Collapsing towers
    Pray for NY
    Now we see why
    Hate is ragid
    Death is savage
    Does it matter
    Brains &
    Guts &
    Lungs I splatter
    We gone shatter
    Quite maddhatter
    Cause disaster
    Bring it faster
    He much faster
    You so weak
    Tantrum do it faster
    Pop the 8 ball
    Drink the nighttrain
    Drunk like wynos
    Hard to maintain
    Caught in the dirt
    Stuck in the grave
    Cut by the foot
    Cant runaway
    Gasping for breath
    Please/What is next?
    No need for love
    Death by a slug
    Death by these drugs
    Popin this pills
    Xtasy pills
    Potent like dope
    Fen for this here
    Blood in your eyes
    Mask on my face
    Hurt in my eyes
    Why you do this
    Leave me like this
    My moms was my dad
    What can I do
    Now im reloaded
    Now you must die.....
    Dad where the fucc was you????

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy reload and i see all ready !
    beware Tantrum on the loose
    ready to beam and bustin through.
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    For the love Brother $$RICH$$
    I just needed to vent a little
    Thanks for the support
     
  4. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have mad skills.
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Brother Ibrahim
    I appreciate you Brother
    You always got my back
    Much love 2 Ya
     
  6. nevar

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    this was deep flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
  7. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Tantrum that chit was dope!!!!!!!!
    Great write brother:kiss1:
     
  8. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love Nevar
    Cursed Heart Stay blessed sisters
     
  9. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    man...i love this....that's what im talkin bout. the antidote to all that Shakespearian/ post-academic garbage. this is it.

    love it, Tantrum. Sounds like where Im coming from. terror poet daring you to move....i love this.
     
  10. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEWWWW HEWWWW .... UNCAGED RAGE .... AWESOME WORDS POET ... DO YA THANG. I LOVED THIS PIECE
     
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