Black Poetry : poetry.....(in raw form)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Jan 1, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :deal:

    Like sand to glass these things are sought,
    poetry in motion are the words from thoughts,
    entwined within our minds these words are felt,
    positioned between fantasy and reality are how these lines are dealt,
    like a hand of blackjack on a vegas strip,
    visualize these actions on a poetic tip, standing in a smoke filled room as this jazz mood calls,
    echoes of past poets fill within these eclectic halls,
    clearing my throat to release some deep felt vibes,
    this is my mental caravan so enjoy this ride,
    call me captain caramel as embark upon this excursion of thoughts,
    take heed to warrings for some words spit like darts,
    But if you felt poetry before then you know it sooths most hearts

    So again....

    This is captain caramel that's Mr Python to you,
    a gemini in nature in the things that I do,
    My poetry expands from the cradel to the grave,
    I'm locked into this thing called poetry as it's submissive slave,

    My bond is unbreakable
    My thoughts are unshakeable
    My sign just made 4 two
    My vibe will not wait for you
    I'm not capeable
    of haveing that hate for you
    I'm a dam poet so I will just let my words skate for you

    So again I state......

    this is poetry in it's raw and untamed form
    beauty of chaos within it's wicked storm
    creativity of light into the darkest depth
    cherrished in awe like a childs first step
    so welcome to my ride but please buckel up
    as it shall spin on it's axis like a low rider truck
    Im that teardrop of joy as his bride enteres the church
    im the hawk watching his prey while standing on his perch

    this is just poetry my friends without any ends
    it's flow is eternal from begining to end
    my poetry is my love like infinity times 2
    im the python of rhyme ..this i thought you knew. :wink:

    01/01/2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing from the heart, as usual. Liked the vibe.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIG DAT.....

    well my friend since i just post
    poerty anew....
    this here
    i feel the vibe...
    and understand
    now i likes this drop....
    HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!!!!
    i likes this...:lol:....Angel
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling your vibes as you move in time...flow on poet this is truly devine
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4 the support
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis drop was awesome
    i was all in it from start
    keep da ink running smoothly
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    :geek: It seems like we moves as one in two different places...hhhuummmmm :wink:
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :geek: "Blue" glad you liked this it was something that came as I logged into the site.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich my brother thanks 4 the view. man we need to blaze some soon.
     
  10. angelicsage

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    I love the rhythm and vibe in this piece
    you have such a way of taking the hand
    of your reader and leading them through
    your mind & soul...
    and it's always a pleasant trip.

    Bravo...
     
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