Black Poetry : Poetry In Motion

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  1. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like lines of poetry
    Orchestrated so perfectly
    Every metrical form, every part
    So is your matchless beauty that captured my eyes
    And your ambiance that stole my heart
    Not once did I ever imagine
    That I would witness such an angelic and artful prose
    In the midst of a garden of flowers
    I am in constant awe of your features
    For you are an immaculate yellow rose
    Each time I glance your way
    You keep blossoming, keep thriving
    My attraction grows stronger day by day
    Your presence shines so brightly
    That it even eclipses the sun
    And as I am writing you see
    I hope you will take notice of me
    That this poetic impulse
    Is not generated by some slight of wind
    That surfaces from time to time, every now and then
    Because with each line that I write
    I know you can illuminate my darkest nights
    So if you never receive me as your true love
    And etch our names in the heavens above
    That is quite alright you see
    Because I take delight in lines of words
    Subjects and predicates, nouns and verbs
    That fit together so perfectly
    Floating upon the clear blue celestial sea
    My Fair Lady, you are like poetry to me
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME

    Welcome to the garden
    Partake of the tree of knowledge
    Poetry in this house of cards,
    Beats going to college-

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the greeting .... just became a member today

    From the heart I speak truth and knowledge
    Learn from this poetic college

    "the world has yet to see
    the slightest glimmer of the best of me
    In due time all things shall be revealed
    Behold the intricate beauties of my mind
    I hope you read this message
    The world's best kept secret is no longer concealed"

    -excerpt from "Message In A Bottle" by Yours Truly
     
  4. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dam write me a line...... yeah yeah .....

    i love these lines : that i would witness such an angelic artful prose ....... skip to ......for u are an immaculate rose .

    poetic impulse not generated by some slight wind that surfaces from time to time ever now and then .

    this is nice
     
  5. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the compliment
     
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    loving it man
     
  7. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    appreciate that
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I'm weightless and drifting somwhere on the milkyway. Beautiful!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    you encaptured the true essense
    of beauty
    in this poetic message

    keep the flowing rolling...
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx khasm ... continue to inspire
     
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