Black Poetry : Poetry dying to be released

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Jun 3, 2012.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like kicking some nouns and verbs around
    putting pen to paper and getting my thoughts down
    For in my head adjectives and adverbs fight to be heard
    just random lines rising up to be translated and conferred
    Tick, Tock is all I hear resounding in my brain
    So constant that it becomes a sweet refrain
    Poetry inside of my dying to be released
    from a whisper to a a scream, volume increased
    Poetry begins to slowly ooze its way out my pores
    When it feels like i have left her too long on ignore
    Guess I'll give in and let her have her creative way
    Writing lines and lines until there nothing left to say

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love his had me swimming in it like suga water...
     
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    Sister Poet asimplepoet,

    Thank you for allowing her to do her thing. She/You need to be heard. Good to read you again.

    (smile)
     
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    This is one poet that is happy this sister poet let it be - 'released'

    <info turning the volume up>