Black Poetry : Poetry Battle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 11, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS ONLY FOR FUN-PEOPLE WHO TAKE THIS SERIOUSLY
    I FEEL SORRY-POETS THAT POST TO THIS AND TAKE THIS PERSONAL
    YOU MIGHT WANT TO CALL FOR PERSONAL HELP-BUT THIS IS JUST A BATTLE
    NOT TO BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY WE ARE HERE JUST FLOWING- SO ON WITH THE BATTLE.....


    Okay Okay
    If a poet can hang with me
    Can spit that fire like me
    Then this the time too see
    If I have any takers let them be heard
    Its Time "Poetry Battle"

    Your poetry weak to me
    Sorta like Petty Pablo and freek a leek
    Smack that taste with this ether see
    Crying for help boy Jesus please
    Snatch your dreadlocks cut your tee
    Im globtrotting to harlem just to shank you B
    Im a bad mother-And this is a feature see
    I got road rage im gone teach ya see
    Step to the franchisee burn bodies like bleach and see
    You cant handle the fact lyrics straight release ya see
    I speak my mind never bite my tongue ya flea
    Listen-I dont need your love
    Make up kiss and hug
    TLC still fighting scrubs
    Plenty waterfalls and a bottle of bud
    Slap the sense into your membrane
    Shine harder than cadillacs and wood grain
    Batalacs you would change
    Im a keep doing my thang
    Nuts dangle-Balls just hang
    Guns spit out my violence man
    I advocate killing im the wildest man
    Who cares what you think when im wildin man
    Suicide door and trap floors seperate the vilonce and...
    Tie you down-Watch your scary facial expressions
    Persperate cause you scared of the pressure
    You bullet proof I can double the plessure
    I got cop killers that'll go right through your sweater
    Death up on my mind-This aint no scarletts letter
    Hatred towards poets i gues that dont make it better
    Step to the KING quish you like jelly beans
    Invision my world and the horror i've seen
    Needles that puncture the soul of fends
    Razor blades rip your soul and things
    Dangle the bone for all you chicken wings
    Battlin Poets well thats my thing

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fo' Sho!

    Dang.. Brotha Tan...
    you leaving em'
    weathered, withered and worn...
    Don't hurt nobody... LOL.
    I'm feeling it all day...

    >stepping to the left< I can't hang. LOL.
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: LOL
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister
    I know a weak link
    Will step up soon
    I'll knock em out first round
    Much Love Sister
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SPITTING THAT HOT FIRE COMPUTER SCREEN SWEATING TIGHT FLOW
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    somebody say they wanna battle
    well info bout too step in the ring
    you sound like you smokin too much poetic herbalism
    every other day talkin bout how you the king
    with yo nursery rhymes
    best believe I got a bib for ya
    one verse can take ya breathe away
    now I gotta live for ya
    stop lyin bout ya fake times
    and fantasy crimes
    take a look at your own pic bruh
    you even postin up wit fake dymes
    tryin to portray everything you see in videos
    ain't hard too tell you just a fake thug
    talking bout yourself eerday
    then come back and show the rest of the family fake love
    I wanted too step in
    when you were tryin too diss poetic
    but when she hit yoiu with that "Jerri curl" joke
    I said nah, she handling her own so I said forget it
    but now since you wanna battle
    you just opened up the door too yo own dimise
    cause I'm gonna hit you wit some real ****
    and make you take off your own disguise
    bring you back from fantasy island
    and cut you too short too slap box with Tattoo
    a grown man still throwin Tantrums
    and think he a mack too
    the only reason you spit fire
    is cause yo breathe is hot
    line after line that don't make sense
    Is that the best you got
    cause if so you should be the last person
    too call somebodys poetry weak
    like I said you got fake love
    but I'mma let my poetry speak
    you gonna get just what you ask for
    funny how you asked for it
    it's gettin harder and harder too hold the real you inside ain't it?
    Poetic, I'm gonna make him apologize .....don't worry love cause we all saw it!!
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your lyrics are funny to me
    Like crackheads and rehad
    You a crash dummy to me
    And then its so funny to see
    An overweight milkdude
    No stud-You scrub
    I then seen your picture
    No Love
    Why you even step to the king
    You so dam lonely
    You still beating your meat
    While your gurl relaxing her feet
    You aint getting no action I see
    Maybe thats the disgruntle I see
    Knowing your lyrics are outdated
    Get your weight up you think??
    Apologies will come from me
    Please I got lyrics that'll make you slap your momma G
    You cant vut the mustard
    But you trying to ketchup
    Maddrapper been shut you down
    Now I guess i got to step up
    While you always whinning
    I'll knock out your hiccups
    I got to pick the kid up
    Thumb in his mouth snot rag at ur side
    Watch spongebob squarepants
    Sucka dont even deny it
    You buster and I'll say it again
    First skeletor looking
    Punk with glitter in his hair
    Stand back and kiss my yup
    You like spoiled milk
    I said outdated before
    You need to give up and let it go
    You say the love aint real
    Sucka why you still here
    Waiting for ya momma
    She cant help you here
    So when you wake up
    And realize yo crap is so weak
    I'll be with your woman
    Having her touch her feet

    NEXT!!!!
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You For The LOve
    Black Soul Im just throwing
    The haters in body bags
    I think jealously runs rapid
    Much Love Poet Black
    I got some more pics
    With model chicks set the
    Haters ugly right off!!!
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now...Now

    Tantrum... are you sure you wanna do this:nono:
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its for fun to me
    What do you mean
    Its a poetry battle
    This is how you play the game
    If people are taking this serious
    Im sad for them
    Im just battling
    No harm no foul
    Unless people take it there
    Sister Sonnee
    I think people need to lighten up
    I explained this is just a poetry battle
    To battle other poets
    To test there ryhme skills
    Thats it thats all
    I cant help society
    I cant change peoples perception
    I can only do me Sister
    Much Love 2 You Still Poet
     
  10. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NEXT IN LINE HERE COME BLACKSOUL
    SO ALL YOU LITTLE BOYS PUT YOUR CONVERSATION ON HOLD
    SEE YOU SWING YOUR LITTLE BABY PUNCHES
    LET ME GUESS WHEN U WERE LITTLE THE GIRLS USE TO TAKE YOUR LUNCHES
    CAME TO FIGHT A WARRIOR INSTEAD I GOT A LITTLE KING
    SO PRINCE STEP OUT ONLY GROWN FOLK ON THIS RING
    SEE YOU SINKING FAST IN MY VERBAL QUICKSAND
    SHOULD HAVE TAKEN THE ADVICE OF EVERYONE ELSE AND RAN
    SON I DON'T SMACK THATS NOT HOW GROWN MAN DO
    PUT THOSE BULLETS AWAY THEY GO RIGHT TROUGH
    TRYING TO STEP UP GUESS WHAT YOU JUST GOT PUSH DOWN
    YOU CAN'T KISS MY FEET STANDING UP GET ON THE GROUND
    WON'T EVEN WASTE A BODY BAG I LEAVE YOU ON THE STREET
    FAMILY CRYING HATING THE DAY SOUL WAS THE ONE YOU HAD TO MEET
    HOW YOU GOT ROAD RAGE BUT GOT NO CAR
    DON'T THINK THOSE WAL-MART BOOTS WILL TAKE YOU FAR
    YOU NO KILLER JUST A DEALER SELLING HOT TRASH
    WHY DON'T YOU DO THE WORLD A FAVOR AND LIKE THE MOVIE SAID "CRASH"
    DON'T KNOW WHY YOU TRYING TO HAD CAUSE THIS SOUL DON'T DIE
    HATE WASTING A BULLET JUST GO FIND SOME PLACE TO LIE

    NOT PERSONAL DOG
     
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